Lying together
your whispers
guide my lips
over you.
I kiss your body
and learn
a whisper's impact.
The passion
within the voice
begging for all
that I can give.
Your hushed tones
beckon me
to taste all of you.
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A contest entry
- (PIF) Semi-Quickie 'Light' Based Love/Sensual/Erotic ect by The Unknown Poet1.
600 points, ended June 18, 7 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is nicely sensual in its few words. Thank you for the entry into my contest
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whispers in the night...makes me tingle! This soft and sensual.
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I love this poem.. starting with "your whispers guide my lips over you".. I love the word "whisper" ..very peaceful and sensual.. "The hushed tones beckon me to taste all over you"..perfect words ..nothing could never need changed here.. feels the senses
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