clouds stained
with all my questions,
the molded pillow
soaking tears up
from a lingering soul
I forfeited when
your shadowed heart
I found
In a list
A contest entry
- Word Bank, Word Limit by Piccola.
600 points, ended June 7, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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nice work with the line limit and with the words. Thanks a lot for entering. It only has 24 words and you could have come closer to the limit, but that wasn't a stated rule so ... anyway thanks again.
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Oh my this was a brillient dark penning and I could feel the cloud of sadness loom over me. Got any anti depressents or perhaps happy pills lol
Well done dear!!!!
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Just a word bank, not real but don't get the little blue pills confused with the white ones
disasterous lol 
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Shadowed hearts... I see it poet! I feel it too. Excellent. Good luck in the contest!
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Some hearts are not accepting of the light, but you have to help them push open the door, it is there if you allow them some time. Love, C
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This is beautiful Hun, I truly love it ~Bret~
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s Love, Chez
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I do not know quite what to say. I am really not used to this kind of attention at all, it is a bit scary actually, although i am not sure if scary is the right word ~Bret~
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Mmmm scary?? lol I don't think I have ever scared anyone in my life!
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not really scary just , unusual to me I guess would be a better choice of words
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Wow..this was just so wonderful,
for some reason it kind of seems like it
should be read like, your telling a secret and you don't want anyone to hear you tell this..
I don't know.. It could be just me.. lol..
But I really loved this..
Great job..! Best of luck!
Angel
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Oh I think it should be whispered too!
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Lol.. is it a secret?
only secrets are to be whispered 
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Was a secret lol but I think he knows
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Yay!!!
lucky guy him!!!!
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lol Don't know if he thinks so yet
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