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Dear Dad

Do I deserve
to presume
to pack right up and leave you
I'm leaving this behind
my life, no longer yours
to treat as if a chore
every day is an opportunity
to leave and breathe
but you assume I can't do either
without you next to me
oh, Jerry
how time has changed you
I would have like you better
at twenty

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