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Deep Sleep

If i die would u cry?
If i was dead, would a tear be shed?
If i wasn't here, would you shed a tear?
Maybe today is the day.
I can't wait to lay, and never see another day.

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  • jakesgirl
    January 12

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    I Think This Is The Best Pome In The Contest. U Ask Some Good Qestion's And Its So Sad Im Sure Their Are Ppl Who Would Miss U If U were DEad!