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Noon

I lay with head on
pillow molded
to my thoughts.

In my dreams
clouds stain my
blue sky.

I search my soul
to find answers to questions
that float above.

They cast shadows
on my heart.

Am I doomed
to forfeit love to
a world where darkness
lingers,

or will I stand
in the noon
of the sun.


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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    June 10, 2008
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    Another word bank...another nice job D.! I enjoyed the spirit of this write...

    Blessings~

  • piccola silver member
    June 7, 2008
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    nice work with the words and limit thank you for entering