Branching from my wandering roots
I bleed strands of longing
I'm your specimen
stare with anticipation
ache for my touch
Author notes
credit pic - Clone by shutupandwhisper
Quickie - 10/20/20
Creator falling in love with his creation.
In a list
A contest entry
- 10/20/20 Quickie.... you know you want to! by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended June 5, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like this a lot. Great imagery here. Quite erotic and the sensuality oozes throuugh this piece. Very well-written.
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Wayne Leon
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Good.
I love this.
Its short and captivating.
Keep up the good work.
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Love the way you have used this as a metaphor for brancing out from being inhibited! Wonderful take!
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ooh, so nice and sensual while so restrained
one melts into the lines
good work in such a short time
the emotions shine through
You have excelled -
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Hey, thanx...this was actually pretty challenging for me... So really thanx a lot...lol.
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Very cool take loved the authors notes too!
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Excellent
Wonderful take on the prompt. best of luck in the contest.
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