Its all unreal.
Its all so fake.
Well I guess I have
my life to take.
When I'll see the world
I dont know
all I see now is a cloud of snow.
Bubbling lava grows up so fast.
Its the last bit of my life
I'll make it last.
I curl up in a ball
I shut my eyes tight.
I try to remember happy times
all I see is night.
I open my eyes slowley
realize I'm in bed.
It's really unbeliveable
how many bad dreams I have had.
Author notes
It is a bad dream about being in heavan then falling to Hell.
Comments
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Wow i almost had the same dream well kinda lol i usally start on earth then fall into my grave where i end up in heaven looking threw a mirror and seeing how i would look like on hell... very interesting lol
i like this poem my favorite part is "Bubbling lava grows up so fast." that is worded so good
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Great poem I really liked it
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WOW REALLY DEEP.
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good job
Well I guess I have
my life to take,
try to remember happy times
all I see is night.
these are the best lines in this poem this is a good poem even though it could use some work on imigery and diction [word choice] it is still realy good
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