We speak in tributes
to one another
We think in memories
of one another
What is creativity but a different way of putting
what has already been said?
I listen to the media
I reiterate the bended facts
but I don't know the difference between emotion and terrible
twists of the beauty you can find
hiding in the buildings, burning in the fires that
I always hear about.
One time I preached the tale of a child being saved
not from a television enhanced predator
but from the natural wonders of the world
No one listened to what I saw with my own eyes.
No one cared to hear it.
Because they heard another lecture on
the end of the world
It comes tomorrow.
It comes today.
It came yesterday.
We're a dying breed of maniacs and liars and I'm the one at the head
I'm the one standing with the megaphone
preaching about the end
And when it comes.
The key you've tried to earn through fear and belligerence
and self loathing and peer denial and reverence and sacrifice
and lies and downtrodden hope and blocked creativity
and mortal sins and immortal sins and chastity and purity
You will discover
It is black. We will burn. It is black.
It is nothing.
A contest entry
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600 points, ended June 7, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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Wow
I don't remember if this was changed or not but the ending was perfect on re-read -
This pumped me up at a steady pace but was anti-climatic in the end... Work on that if you give a shit about my oppinion because I like this.


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Worked on it. If you have any suggestions I'd be willing to consider them.
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