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Grace does enter thee
Beyond vast skies
The timeless gaze
Reflect thee in your eyes.

Love alight with the rising sun
Sets in my heart
Opening my soul
Your creation bequeaths my only one.

Connected beauty elemental my fair
Existence rooted beset in time
Amore unjust to compliment
And hold our love so subtle in your eyes.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 8, 2008

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    You did a great job while desgining the immagery part of this impressive poem..well done ...thanks for sharing it...my friend..