Questioning the width
of my caring,
the depth, of given compassion
and the height of my love.
Arghhh….!
The weight
of this obsessive
compulsion,
is to much to bear.
Author notes
Prompt 1--I'm not quite sure I care anymore
20-30 words
In a list
A contest entry
- hurry for yet another quickie by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended June 5, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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nice work
very honest piece here.
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Brilliant
Way to go girl!! This is just a brilliant write.
The weight of this obsessive compulsion, is to much to bear.
I can see a book out of you sweetie!! Congradulations on the GOLD. Very well deserved! Bookmarked this one!!
Much Love
Aunty Kelle
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Thanks Aunty Kelle, this one really came form the heart..was a time I had to learn I ws becoming obsessive about, well just about everything in my life...It was a pleasure to share this and to win gold...I am honured it's good enough in your eyes to be bookmarked
Cin
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I'm feeling ya sis!! Being a little OCD myself... fab write! Congrats on the Gold
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Wow.. you did a wonderful job!!!
I can see why you got gold sissy!
Very lovely! I really liked this..
Congrats!!!!
Angel
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Grats on the gold!! well deserved
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omg i never expected gold
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I did! this was wonderful!
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this is full of so many emotions to say in the least. I really like your form here, it works very well here. Liked it.
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thank you so much for the gold...I thought there were better then mine there, so I am flattered this reached you in the ways it did 
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Nice job Cin!!! loved the presentation here. this is wonderful
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eeeek!!!!! it's pink!
lol.. best of luck you 
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Showin' some love for your soon to be poem. Best of luck!!!
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you you you
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