Can space be created or destroyed
or time either starting from nothing
expanding until stars fall from the sky in wasting
to be recreated from leftover membranes
depleted of energy, of reality that faded away?
That singularity or those membranes
hyper-inflaton or clanging membrane cymbals
perhaps Platonic universal time containing temporality
unlike the One described by Plotinus who issues everything as Spirit
for God is the ultimate reality and matter ultimately spiritual founded
Jesus Christ is the way through all contingent reality
the temporal universes and reality like a surrealist apparition for experience.
Ought round building lots be required by law? [Reward: double points]
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Wow, I love it when poets just put their thoughts into a magnificent piece of work
This is exactly what you've done. It's like a thought that was just combusting, ready to explode - you let it out, spiraling down back to earth 
Great write
Amber
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Cool concept cool poem I loved it. Definetly made me think and it was somewhat relateable in a wa........I'm not very good at poetry myself, but I love to come on this site and see refreshing work like this absolutely spectacular. I have a way of reading good poetry more then I have a way of writing it. Its a gift I guess lol. Keep up the great write and I will keep on checking out your poetry. ........: at yourself on the back::
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thanks for the comment
'New Theories of Everything' by Barrow (published 2007) has many math based, unconvntional approaches to cosmology. I enjoyed reading it.
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Interesting write. Not many poets will write with such wording, for fear of being misunderstood. Not a good poem for those uneducated, but still good none the less.
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thanks for reading the poem
Its good to have understanding comments. No worry about being misunderstood in poetry I think-that will happen regardless.
best wishes,
Gary
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