Lost Hopes, Restored By You

My gentle lover
you have restored my faith
in men.

You have given me the strength

I need to change

like a catapiller blossoming into a butterfly.

The love you have shares with me

has warmed my soul

and made me believe in my once lost hopes

Even when your far away

your spirit still lingers

in every cell of me

My once desolate heart

is now an abundent source

of everlasting light

Author notes

Joie de Vivre
* hope
* butterfly
* garnet
* superficial
* light
* circlet
* prism
* star
* cell
* friend
* heart
* spirit
* love
* angel
* strength
* faith
* halo

A contest entry

Zach's Options Contest by ZachP. 450 points, ended July 12, 2008, 9 entries
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What About Love? by GypsyEyes. 500 points, ended July 30, 2008, 132 entries
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Everybody Loves Somebody by CatQueen248. 450 points, ended August 3, 2008, 31 entries
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.•¤**¤•. Love .•¤**¤•. by XBeautiful MistakeX. 550 points, ended August 4, 2008, 31 entries
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Comments

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XBeautiful MistakeX
July 24, 2008

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Wow this is FULL of love..Youre an amazing poet. This is totally what I was looking for!! Thank you mucho for entering!!

Oz
CatQueen248
July 21, 2008

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Line 5 "caterpillar" and line 7 "shared." I really liked the way you italized the key words, it made your poem very unique. I especially liked your beginning stanza. Thank you for entering my contest
Blooming Poet
July 21, 2008
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option 3
Lady Australis
June 6, 2008
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this is beautiful sweety
well done