You killed yourself because you could have spoken. Against the wrong that’s been done to you and your chosen. A life of silence has killed what made you great.
Somewhere in between, you slowly lost your grace. You fell from heaven into the thorny brush. It tore out your heart and turned your blood into puss.
There is no reversal to the road you’ve taken. But there maybe a way for you to regain your graces. You get on your feet, you open your mouth, kick and scream and fucking shout.
Only then will your corpse arise from its grave. Then your life can begin again. And your debt will slowly be paid.
A contest entry
- ~~~Demons~~~ by anguish.
395 points, ended July 25, 2008, 13 entries
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WOW this is a really deep poem!! I love it!!
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i feel the pain in this and the inner need for things to be made right. i dont find it as harsh as i do assertive. VWD!
good luck in the contest
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great peom... very emotional... i dont really know what else to say ...either than its great and keep up the great writing
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Interesting
gruesome!!! and very hostile in nature. loved it. Good luck in the contest -
Oh wow
its so ANGRY. like a friend or family member u used to love SO much just stabbed u in the back drastically. and now they are asking for forgivness, and ur giving them that chance but ur saying it'll be a LONG time b4 they can have ur trust again. really good imagery here, great write, keep it up.
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It was family 3 members actually. And not so much stabbed me in the back but when some one takes the wrong road it s up to you as family to point out what’s the rite way to go. To point out the truth in an age of lies. But as graphic as I made it to be I think it really spoke for it’s self. Thanks for the read
Alex
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