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Fatally Gorgeous

She's Fatally Gorgeous
With Eyes Of Emeralds
And Lips Like Heroine

[She's been kissing boys
In bathroom stalls
Since she was in 6th grade]

She flashes her smile
When the Camera bulbs flash at her
She's just to good to be true

[Of course behind closed doors
It ain't so great
Her best friends are Ana and Mia
And that porecilain toilet]

I guess it just goes to show
That no matter how great
Someone's life seems to be
It isn't.


[Life isn't always greener on the other side]

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Yes..Kelly Your Screenname was the inspriation for this.

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  • icyrose
    July 5, 2008

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    if you were referring to the drug...it's Heroin

    But apart from that, awesome write...really speaks turths. The exterior will be beautiful even if the interior is rotten to the core.
    Kinda like Dorian Gray...

  • She Stole My Voice
    June 5, 2008

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    "She's Fatally Gorgeous
    With Eyes Of Emeralds
    And Lips Like Herione"

    'heroine'

    and is there a reason each word is capitalized?
    Fabulous anyway.


    ~Princess of Shadows~


  • Comic Book Romance gold member
    June 5, 2008

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    haha i frealing love this Ayla!
    and wanna know the crazier part...
    this poem totally sounds like me too.
    haha.
    niiice

    love you chicky!