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Quiet Contemplation

I listen to your voice
And realize there was no choice
Now I'll always be by your side
In my heart you'll always reside
I don't know if I am held in such regard
Or if my words you simply discard
But I think that by now I don't care
There are  many memories I wish to share

But now I question your motivations
Were these common adaptations
To morbidly cultivate your prey
Slinking in and stealing their day
Macabre decorations dawning the horizon
You think over time people would wizen
To the game you quietly excelle
Dispursing pain that is known well

Why  do I doubt these good intentions
When all they are are simple intervention
To save my body from well placed harm
I know it's an attempt to disarm
The type of over-powering unease
Growing by staggering degrees
And all I want you to know
I realize this, more than I will show

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in honor of the only person i trust all the way, 100%. and this person knows who they are.

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  • dark-dreams
    August 5, 2008

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    'And all I want you to know
    I realize this, more than I will show'

    i really love those last lines...to me it shows you hold a capacity beyond what is...

    -gxxoo


  • KayJay
    July 18, 2008

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    Nicely said... trust is a precious thing and it's wonderful when you find someone that you can trust with your heart...
    Ken


  • Swan song gold member
    July 4, 2008
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    Very good I liked the middle stanza the most