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A New Love

I burned the bridge behind me
ending it all with a final reality
not even looking for another man
you came to me with a final stand

I closed the door behind our thing
placing my self out of your reach
when you showed your love finally
then with romance you begin to teach

the roses you bought made me smile
the love you gave made me cry
the ring you gave me made me high
a love that will last quite awhile

two heartbeats started after an end
beginning my life all over again
as each day passes I love you more
on this love I will not close the door

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  • Poesing
    June 16, 2008
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    Ahhhhhhhh love - wonderful!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    Precious.

    I'm soooooooo happy for you sissy!

    Much love, light, and laughter~

    Brother Timothy


  • Topaze gold member
    June 7, 2008
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    Oh this is a very romantic and heartfelt piece, thank you for your fine entry in this contest.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    June 5, 2008

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    Oh sis I love this.
    That closing stanza is Sensational!!!

    Best of luck in the contest.


    Delila