My daddy never loved me,
nope,
not even for a day,
he's seen me only as a baby
with no recollection of his face
my pretty little room
with ribbons & bows
was never graced with bedtime stories
by the man who should be guiding me
No... my daddy never loved me,
and he never will,
now almost 35 years old
my existence is forgotten,
nothing more than
an unpleasant churn in his gut,
a distant thought... hey? didn't I once?
no daddy, you never did,
and that's sculpted me right up to today,
and I just want you to know
that fuck you daddy,
you never earned that title
and I know you never will
Author notes
Contest but my dad never loved me. by plasma
the title is your prompt.
A contest entry
- but my dad never loved me. by iverbthenoun.
1000 points, ended July 2, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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a good poem - ah some men just wander off into the night, they can not handle being a parent, they do not think of anyone but themselves really.
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I can totally relate to this as well... wow so much infact. Good job on this... it really hit home for me.
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Wow
Is this poem true or was it written for the contest, if its true i can TOTALLY relate, although im not 35 years old. lol, but either way it is FANTASTICALLY written, i love it and once again, can ttly relate, keep on writing, its fantastic.
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yep, it's true. thank you for the comment
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