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(verse 1)
Staring Out into the black night,
Waiting for time to give us back our sight,
And I can see the way you move...
Wait, don't go!!!

(chorus)
Don't wait for me to die,
Because for you there's no way I will lie
Down into this hollow grave, Wait... Don't go!!
(Repeat)

(verse 2)
Now you're here standing before me,
I can't wait for you to breathe,
I'm hating myself just one more time,
This pain I can feel it seethe!
Don't open up that door,
Its going to be a nightmare once more,
For yourself and for me...
Wait don't go!!!

(chorus)

(bridge)
I'm sick of you, I'm sick of your lies,
I'm done I'm through!!!
(repeat x3)

(quiet acoustic part)

(verse 1)

(chorus x2)

Author notes

Well this is a song my band wrote about 3 years ago now, its still rough because we haven't worked with it since we wrote it, but I like it.

Its a metal song about abuse as a child and the feelings that tear you down and kill your senses.

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