Can you see what your actions bred?
My heart once vital,
flooding my soul with passion
now beats an echo of yesterday.
Do you know how long I wept?
sleepless memories.
Waking each morning your name on my lips,
drowned in silence by your absence.
Will you now return to me?
renewed seductive dance?
Lifeless shell of past existance gone,
resurrection a futile game,
agony the victor.
A contest entry
- >>Inlove & Alone by Lislaine.
457 points, ended June 5, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is sad. Wonderful writing here Montie. Such emotion within the words here. This is quite dark too. Very well-written Montie. Good luck in the contest.
With
Dark
Love
Wayne Leon
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AMAZING!! GOOD LUCK and hope you had fun.... thx for entering
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