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Eyes, in contact
for a moment,
and I remembered
golden stars
amidst a sultry green sky.

Your slight smile
before we settled,
in the dawn's muted light;

the warmth of our thighs,
the gentle curve of our hips
and another morning is lost

except, you remain
in my poem.







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Amazing that you can be physically closer to a stranger on a bus than those near you at home.

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  • Mari Goes gold member
    June 6, 2008

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    This is so good!
    What you say in your notes is very true.
    And yet we don't think much about, well I didn't, till now.

    Mari