Those words keep booming
within my ears -
and for once,
I'd love to abuse that cliché,
Although I already knew what I had
Before I lost it.
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Fifth of june, 2008 - 10PM.
My relationship of 3 years and ten months - 1 year of which we shared our home - down the sewer.
And I just don't know what to do.
Please tell me what you think
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Awesome
This is well written, but I'm sorry you have a broken heart.
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What A Piss-face!
It really sucks that loving people have to get betrayed so often. That bastard is such a cliche. You are a diamond among coal,darling. As much of your life you have invested in loving him;I GUARANTEE you will move on in less time then you two were together. He,on the other hand,will always remember what a prick he was and have to live with it. This experience will just make you wiser and one step closer to your soul mate. Hang in there,sweetie!
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He's a shit.
I don't know what else to say, so I'll cross my arms stamp my foot and demand that you deserve better then that! -
sad
Leander, sorry to hear of HIS loss..
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Oh, wow. Sad. It takes courage to write what happens to them, especially of this caliber. Leander, stay strong. Tough times are coming, but if you keep your head up, there's always a way out of the water. You will find love again. If anyone can, you can. Don't give up on love.
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I'm sorry to hear Leander.
We don't know each other very well but I do know how it feels to lose someone. Just know that you're not going through this alone. Not just your friends are supporting you. I am supporting you too and if you ever need to vent I'm here to listen. You can ask Kayla for my yahoo or msn (which one you have) >.> Sorrehs Kayla for making you the MESSENGERGIRL <.< Just know that you'll be fine and stand tall in the end. You're a strong person and everything will turn out to be the way they're supposed to be.
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Awww Leander I'm sorry hun.
I'm here for you and if you ever need to talk about something just send me an IM.
Love you Uncle? XD
I think that's right if your Kari's bro than your my uncle
Oh and *does the chicken dance while singing her version of it "I don't want to be a chicken, I don't want to be a duck, so kiss my butt?" to make a total fool out of herself* hehe
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what?
OMG SWEETHEART! I AM SO SORRY! I HOPE THINGS GET BETTER!
I love you and I am here for you if you need me. -
Bro, I am only a im away if you ever need to talk. I am so shocked by that news but please know that you have friends to help back and support you up.
Here's a hug
I am really sorry that you've been hurt so much
I won't say another word cause how can one comfort another with words with this kind of grief expect to just hug and to be there...
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Well first off, babes, my sincere condolences.
This is such an acute poem, it's sharp with feeling and conveys this overwhelming kind of feeling (*...booming*) mixed with regret, possibly anger (*abuse that cliche*) I don't know what else to say except excellent work, as always. Take care of yourself.
eva
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I'm sorry Leander, break ups are never easy and the damned blues that go with them are not fun. There's a hole caused in our life, space that takes time to fill, fortunately we do eventually. It just really sucks until then.
Mr. Optimism, lol
But I am sorry, been there, never going there again.
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Oh nooooo, Leander....
I'm so sorry, my friend...sighs. I wish I could give you a big big hug right now. Just "be" for now....and try to write towards the light.
My arms around you......
~ Nicolette
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Lee. :[
I just, I don't know what to say. Even though we're not the closest, if you need someone for a late night IM or something, hit me up.
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I'm so sorry.
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I'm soooo sorry to hear that
No matter how tough a breakup, I know you'll learn to cherish what you had when it was good and learn from the bad times.
Extra hugs:
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I'm so lost - and know what? I'm going to miss him snoring
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Oh hush. You'll find another guy that snores even louder to replace him
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I wish I could be there right now to give you a big hug. Wish I could tell you that all will be okay.
Ik hou van jou mijn lieve Leander
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there really are no words of comfort. just know you aren't alone
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Wow, my heart goes out to you. It must be so hard going through this. However, good poetry will undoubtedly come out of it.
I hope it all becomes better for you =]
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