Lost in a sea of sadness,
I am confused and afraid,
save me from this wreckage,
take me from this hell,
breath life into my broken body,
be my comfort,
my haven,
i long for love,
for that burning passion,
that can only be cooled
by a lovers kiss,
but alas,
my tough front speaks for itself,
to love and be loved,
oh how i wish...
A contest entry
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300 points, ended June 7, 2008, 22 entries
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Very good work, Very beautifully presented the sadness at the sea shore.... You work is all relates to the imagination, thats great for an author....
Namaste...
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great poem. what a cry for help and for love. very honest.
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eache person , matters not who they are, wishes for that same thing ... to love .. to be loved.
But yet we are also picky on who we accept love from, so at the same time life is love, love is also sometimes the death of one
really great poem
never stop writing my friend !
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This is good, I like it.
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Good
i like it <3
my dear owner
for you
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I liked this a lot. I think everyone feels this way at times. I know I did and love does come.. in time. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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of my fave poems i wrote
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