Good
hair day
I would say
Warm and dry
that's the reason why
Look like a ball of fluff
Cute, cuddly and all that stuff
But you should view me after rain
Scraggly blob of hair caught in the drain
Wishing for sunshine to be cute again
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF PICTURE CONTEST by penman.
750 points, ended June 6, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Change a bad hairday into something beautiful by Wolf Mistress.
700 points, ended May 27, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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I really enjoyed this. Very cute, good form and it makes perfect sense.
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very cute poem. goodluck on the contest
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