So beautiful to my tired eyes
blue marble floating in time
If everyone could see through my eyes
would there still be hate
White clouds drift from my view
lay back and enjoy my gift to you
Instead there is hate and mistrust
destroying what I created
My eyes weep
Author notes
Picture (artist unknown. found on devaintart.com)
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A contest entry
- Dark.. Quickie.. Picture Prompt by Angelflower.
665 points, ended June 8, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Man does destroy that which he touches...always taking never giving enough...Makes my heart heavy at your truths my friend
thank you for sharing with me
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Thank you
Thank you so much. I think we all need to do a little more to clean up our beautiful planet
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BEAUTIFULLY SAD
Your words pull the tears softly from my heart...for as through the eyes of creation man destroys and always will hate...congrats on the HM your words are most heavy but hold a deeper truth than most realize...Niaish for sharing with me
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Thank you
Thank you so much. It amazes me that we continue to destroy the beauty around us
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Aww. this was really wonderful..
You created a sad image that touched my heart..
I really enjoyed this. thanks much for sharing..
Best of luck..
Angel
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Thank You
Thank you so much for the HM
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Thank you
Thank you so much dear sister
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weep no more!!!! yeah to bad theres so much hate in this world.... i like this write... great job on prompt... thanks for sharing it and good luck in contest...!
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Thank you
Thank you so much. You are so right there is too much hate in this world
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