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Disobeying

 

I lay hear in my bed and think of you,

"No" yelled the voice in my head you can't have him.

Your master is getting wise to you and will beat you red,

if you run to the boy the voice yelled at her from with in.

"No i cant help it i need to feel his body on mine".

At midnight she ran to her lover and shared a night of hot passion

when daylight came she creep back into her room

where she saw her master was there waiting for her.

 

"I Told you never to see him again, you have disobeyed me for the last time young lady", the master yelled at her, " you leave me with no choice" said the master. he slide off his belt and grab her by the arm. "No, No, NOOO," she yelled as the master pulled her over his lap 

with grate force he gave her ten hard slaps with the belt. 

 

she lay on the floor weeping with 

 

a low voice she tells her master she will never disobey him again.

 

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  • Zraiiah
    June 13, 2008

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    Interesting.

    It's a fairly good story, but even for a poem I don't think the characters were developed too well nor was it an easy read. Quotations were invented for a purpose. I don't mean to bash you, but it would be better if you cleaned it up a little bit. The plot is very good though. I also like the struggle the girl was having with herself, telling herself not to do it but then giving in to lusty temptation.