Awareness sharpens. Thought trains slide along
rails unsuspected, rarely entertained,
as change spins through effect and cause untrained -
task neither failed, derailed, set to prolong
creation’s alpha-omega. Snaked tongue
feels sense uncoils, unreels, tips scales, sustained
by anticipation that the Way
enlightenment may bring... so ends this play.
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Courtesy welcome and extended [Reward: double points]
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your words are so amazing! this poem is REALLY nice. i like the meter and the rhyme scheme. i like this alot. wonderful write you have here darling keep up the great work<3
-Rizzie -
your words are so amazing! this poem is REALLY nice. i like the meter and the rhyme scheme. i like this alot. wonderful write you have here darling keep up the great work<3
-Rizzie -
AWARENESS SHARPENS,
IT WILL TAKE AS LONG AS IT TAKES TO OMEGA,
I WONDER SOMETIMES IF THE SCALES ARE INDEED TIPPED TOWARDS THE(SNAKE).
ANYWAY I AM ON ENLIGHTENED SIDE FOR AS LONG AS IT TAKES.
BRILLIANT WRITE
ALWAYS A PLEASURE TO READ
GOD BLESS...
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Very different. Um. It's a little hard to decipher. I think that I got it. You could put a little explanation in the author's notes for people who've got an IQ level a point lower than me! LOL
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Ahhh so enlightenment crosses me again! I love how you just lay it all out there, like here you go
Nice work!
Amber -
I'm picking up an allusion to Eden -- am I correct? It's how I interpreted the piece, anyhow, mistaken or not. The mention of the snaked tongue adds a certain dark element to the poem. I like this one quite a bit.
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tainfinite
oh yeh i like this very much you have set a high standard for this comp with this write good luck
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Life is a stage! Love this, you're talented and every word spiraled me through a thorough process.
excellent.
thank you for entering. -
This is good
...as your poems often prove to be.
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I like this.
We are en-lightened by your creative journey
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