Spirit finds epiphanies in answers
given countenance by means of thy pattern alone
which feeble language could never declare
No allegory expresses beauty's beguilement
though pen struggles to cause its appearance
while heart attempts fluency within soft dialect
And flames move across my tongue like dancers
in movements to mimic what thy comeliness hath shown
as sweet balm to alleviate despair
Author notes
I love you.
A contest entry
- MYSTERIOUS BEAUTY by Swan song.
500 points, ended June 21, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very very beautiful
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Thank you &
Thank you for the HM.
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love you too - lol lol kidding wrong person - lol but still love ya my dear brother. you shine in loves tender passions of the heart as love emerses you with your everlasting being. your spirit luminates like the stars as it flows from your heart and soulto your pen. well done and many blessings always xxx
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second and third stanza are phenomenal!
starting reading it and thought it would be one I wouldn't understand, but got to the fourth line and it just made me sigh ... well done!
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Thanks.
The 1st and last stanzas' end words rhyme with each other. -
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roflmao! thanks mate!
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Awe....I agree with miss kiwi. I do not believe
your pen is ever struggling.
This is excellent Sweetie
Best of luck in the contest.
Delila
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Aww.. so beautifully written! I don't think your pen struggles at all to describe your love and the beauty of it...
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