This is a pure song
I have made, to sing to you:
"In your arms I stay
In your touch I breathe
In your kisses I melt
In your warmth I freeze.
In your eyes I see, me.
In your words there is truth that you speak…
When you said that you have loved no one else but me.
In my heart I have loved you more than you’ll know
In my poems are hidden charms of desired feelings I do not show
In my spirit you bring life for my existence
In my thoughts I think, of you and only you
In my life there are moments I treasure…
These are the moments I spend with you."
So as this pure song ends…
I sing softly,
Hoping that one day…
That this song can finally become true.
Author notes
Originally I made the second and third stanza; I added the first and the fourth for the contest. I don't know this does not seem much, when I was writing it I did not know where it would go. But I did try.
A contest entry
- >>Inlove & Alone by Lislaine.
457 points, ended June 5, 2008, 20 entries
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*In my poems are hidden charms of desired feelings I do not show* If words actually came to reality, you guys/girls could be so happy. Lovely
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its vevry sweet and touching
i lik it
who was it about if you dont mind me asking
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Just someone I've been crushing on...
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...very touching!
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Sweet, its good that you tried.. Its amazing, wonderful.. thx 4 entering my contest, hope you had fun and GOOD luck
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