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Leaking eyes seep the night's fog upon the horizon


Obscured clouds swirl in dance
deep within the ocean of mirrors
Here I've found a home of stupor
thus the pearl above does die

Fallen behind the earthen sky


In your eyes I find my soul
in all my wonder
I can only manage
"Why?"

Author notes

I know it said no rhyme, but take a look...if you don't like it, i fix it

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  • Bunny luv26
    November 28, 2008

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    Very pretty and well written. The images you used here were beautiful. Nicely done. Best of luck to you in all things!


  • ixtli
    June 5, 2008

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    breathtaking!

    Beautiful. It captures the mystery and serene beauty of the setting moon in simple yet somehow eloquent words. Amazing!