When i see your eyes....
You take me away....
Who ever denys...
Your beautiful say ...
Remeber tomorrow
And even today ...
No more comes sorrow ...
Beside me to lie ...
Where ever you are ...
You make me alive
When ever I hear
Your vioce arrives,
You bring me again
,When I'm die , alive...
Don't ever you go
With you I fly
Don't ever deny
The heart that you make
It realy flys over
The clouds and sky
Don't ever you hurt
The heart that truts you
You are the girl
With beautiful heart
this is for you you name got (L) and (I) you know your self .. you are sooo close
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great poem
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wonderfull
in this poem you really got your point accross. my favorite part is the lines 5-8 and lines 21-24
-cecilia -
'The heart that you make
It realy flys over
The clouds and sky'
I love these lines
this is really beautiful
so true and genuine
♥
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great poem
you had a nice list of words that made this a great flow! so sweet keep it up..
xx-Brit -
Hehe, It's really cute and sweet. I likey. ^^;
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