Silky, golden curls?
Just massage in,
Wait two minutes,
Rinse and.. MEGAFRIZZ!
Someone somewhere
Is for it!
You just wait.
My monkey arse
On lying face
Defecate!
Author notes
Prompt credit: misslenin
http://photobucket.com/image/funny%20pictures/misslenin/ihatehumidity.jpg?o=2
I could not resist this.
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF PICTURE CONTEST by penman.
750 points, ended June 6, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nicely done. The pic made me laugh out loud and your piece is a great compliment to it. Nice style and wit.
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Short and sweet and kind of funny... wow im a little lost but its early in the morning for me so yeah...
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short but sweet always nice
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I enjoyed the poem but I had to read it several times because there was something not quite right... Building the drama... the comas in some places were not accurately used or rather not all of them were accurately used. However, it seems like you put a lot of thought into it. Just go back and reread it as if you were a guest and pause briefly at each comma. Perhaps you have a different view on how comas are to be used. I could be wrong and it was a very entertaining poem that fulfilled the reader despite the short length. I say good job.
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very cute... and fun.... prettypoetry
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Funny poem
I loved this. It really made me smile. It so refreshing to find humour in poetry. Well done!
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The picture absolutely makes this poem, provides an image I otherwise may not have saw in the exact same way. Brillantly penned and quite hilarious, congrats on HM
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Hehe
Congrats on the Hm this made me smile much love always 
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Wonderful
Very well done. best of luck in the contest.
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Hilarious! The picture is priceless and the poem, too. Sounds just like something they would be trying to sell us that doesn't work. Cheered me.
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