Shines like the gods do in heaven, now and forever more
Buried underneath of sea of ashes, the doubts and pains of life
Not known to the owner, yet its so divine
Pure joy, so loving, so intoxicating of how pure it is
Under the storm, its the calm of the eye, never sour, never wounding.
Its a heart of Gold, full of life
A heavy burden, to form yet worth it all
Blessed be the holder of such a thing, blessed they be
So Loving in all times
So caring to the weakened and the damned
So much Compassion that reaches out even in fear
Never doubt value when holding a golden heart
Its divine, so true is the one who made it, a gift to earth
No need to cry that worthlessness is here, its not anywhere near here
The world has its black,
But those hearts bring us the white and the light
In every day, so don't cry, please shine on in the night, in life
The gold in the heart is worth more than a sea of diamonds
There is no question how much they matter, how much a golden heart is
Smile with that golden light in your eyes, let it shine and love today, everyday
Author notes
This poem is a response someone asked me once if he was worth all the pain going on. This is my answer to him. This poem is also for everyone who doubts their value and yet is so loving. There are so many that doubt the gold of their hearts, I hope this clears it up. Just believe that you shine and smile.
My loved ones who I write this for know who they are without being named. I love you all.
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very nice
very nice write . . liked "so intoxicating of how pure it is" and "Never doubt value when holding a golden heart" . . many do possess in secret . . !!

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Thank you Thank you. Yep, now if only we could uncover all the gold.
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Brilliance
You love and love...while no one loves you back and you take all the shit thrown at you...yet you still love and you stop to question but it doesn't matter. The heart is truly divine but it always takes someone else to bring it out in you. I feel that this poem is an intersection between my mind and my heart...too bad I can't just take it all in stride. I wish I could...maybe I just care too much. I love this poetry...keep it coming.
"The heart hidden behind that flesh
Shines like the gods do in heaven, now and forever more
Buried underneath of sea of ashes, the doubts and pains of life"
Hopefully we can all get past the pain and drama that daily life throws at us. Very difficult at times. 9.5/10.

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Thats the beauty of it though. While we love on and on, though it is not returned by all, it does not go unnoticed. The Heart is a great thing, but we ignore the light within us that is common to us but a dim whisper to the world. Not all love freely. Though you'll have to explain how you feel its an intersection between your heart and mind. Hey we have more then one person so we can carry the weight.
Caring to much is never a bad thing, it is harder to live than one who doesn't care but I'd never give up the stress and all its benefits to be careless. My friends are just worth to much.
This is my art, my passion. So drop by and more will be there for you to read.
Hopefully.
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This was sucha heart-felt write! A very lovely poem! >.< and your metaphors painted brilliant pics in my mind! AWESOME!!!


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Thank you kindly for the comment. It is a good poem and hey sometimes words alone cannot answer what our souls say so poems are needed. Glad ya like it.
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