It is time to move on
Within the ebb and flow of living
My reasons are inconsequential
My destination is within my pen, graphically giving
I am aflame with ideas
My reasoning instilled with imagination
But I am torn apart with ideals
Pen and paper is my creation
I am forever critical of low self esteem
Believing in the powers that be
Yet I am showered with information
That burning feeling that is me
I have spent many an hour reading poetic rhyme
Some have made my heart glad
Many tread waters,
Sublime
I thank you all, you have been an inspiration to me
Warming my heart with wonderful writes
Tears behind my eyes,
Exquisite delights
Dear friends, you have burnt a memory in my soul
Allpoetry, is an interacting home of warmth of words and rhyme
That showers me with wondrous feelings
That is embedded for all time!
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A contest entry
- Say Goodbye to Blue Rew with gifts of FIRE~~~WATER by Blue Rew.
4650 points, ended June 6, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very nice fairwell to Blue Rew... She left? I didn't know... I was off-line around that time. your poem is beautiful. the opening words are very catching. thank you for sharing and congrats of the green!
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What an original and creative thing to do
speak directly to the reader and thank us for inspiring you and warming your heart! This certainly goes BOTH WAYS!
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Beautiful write so heartfelt, I too wonder are you leaving I hope not I would miss you terribly. Your write touched me very deeply and I could relate to low self esteem issues as well. I am here if you ever need to talk. Again thanks for sharing your amazing write with us all. Hugs Theresa
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ah the highs of poetry, to wave a fond farewell to another person with some verse is a great tribute, a good poem.
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Sweet and utterly divine with its meanings of
connection and change. I adored the rhyme and
the flow never falters here. I felt
"I am aflame with ideas
My reasoning instilled with imagination
But I am torn apart with ideals
Pen and paper is my creation"
especially made me aware of the theme of
fire~~~water. Thank-you so much for sharing your gift.
Blue
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are you leaving us sweet poet?
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