It is time to move on
Within the ebb and flow of living
My reasons are inconsequential
My destination is within my pen, graphically giving
I am aflame with ideas
My reasoning instilled with imagination
But I am torn apart with ideals
Pen and paper is my creation
I am forever critical of low self esteem
Believing in the powers that be
Yet I am showered with information
That burning feeling that is me
I have spent many an hour reading poetic rhyme
Some have made my heart glad
Many tread waters,
Sublime
I thank you all, you have been an inspiration to me
Warming my heart with wonderful writes
Tears behind my eyes,
Exquisite delights
Farewell dear friends, you burnt a memory in my soul
Allpoetry, was an interacting home of warmth of words and rhyme
That showered me with wondrous feelings
That embedded for all time!
A contest entry
- Say Goodbye to Blue Rew with gifts of FIRE~~~WATER by Blue Rew.
4650 points, ended June 6, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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ah the highs of poetry, to wave a fond farewell to another person with some verse is a great tribute, a good poem.
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Sweet and utterly divine with its meanings of
connection and change. I adored the rhyme and
the flow never falters here. I felt
"I am aflame with ideas
My reasoning instilled with imagination
But I am torn apart with ideals
Pen and paper is my creation"
especially made me aware of the theme of
fire~~~water. Thank-you so much for sharing your gift.
Blue
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are you leaving us sweet poet?
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