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If Only to Fly

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If  only to fly.
How'd I try.
To lovers arms I'd go.
Oh to be so bold!
No span to great.
I'd not hesitate.
No height to towering,
for Love's overpowering.
In lovers embrace at journeys end
Is where I descend.

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  • Tarja
    June 13, 2008
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    I think this was lovely. It was a little simple but actually I think that it actually does work for the picture because I see a little girl and I do believe that her thoughts would not be too far from these expressed here. You did a wonderful job getting inside her head. Great job and good luck.