I saw a face in the mirror
I wanted him to go away
He looked at me
Even when I looked away
I saw a face in the mirror
I wanted him to die
I got so sick of him
I dropped to my knees and cried
I saw a face in the mirror
He looked so sad
I was very happy
And then he got mad
I killed the face in the mirror
They told me I was insane
"He can't look at me anymore" I said
They told me I was insane
I saw a face in the mirror
The nurse said it was mine
It was cut up and flesh was gone
I now know the face in the mirror was mine...
All along...
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i love it reminds me of the idea u had for the comic ^_^
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Heh, heh. I couldn't help but think of the evil Ash in Army of Darkness, who came out of the reflection and gave him grief. Independent reflection scenes are so creepy! Have you ever seen your own eyes while tripping? It's just so wrong! LOL
About that kitchen knife to the wrist thing, I knew a girl that did that. She doesn't have a left hand now. Isn't that hilarious?
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Truly a disturbing vision of insanity! Well played! Perhaps our greatest critic is ourself, but when that critic starts heckling, one has to do something... Keep your pen to the page and thanks for sharing your talent!
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Holy Dorian Gray, Batman! Not to mention the gruesome scene from Hannibal. Like the repetition of the first line in each stanza. My only stumble was the 16th line
the ending is awesome!
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"Dang-it, colin!"
-Looks at kitchen Knife-
-Grabs knife-
-puts to Wrist-
-looks into Colin's Face-
-stabs Kitchen Knife into Wrist-
"you make me do this....."
"hee... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"
by the way, nice Poem, Lovely Dovely.
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