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Highs and lows

Im fed up of going from highs to lows,
How i'll feel in the morning, nobody knows.

A happiness induced smile, turns to a frown,
Once feeling elated, i now feel so down.

I stare out of the window and look at the rain,
And begin to wonder if i am truly sane.

My emotions are in turmoil, confusion inside,
The point has retired, the crimson has dried.

I want to cry out, to scream and to yell,
But my anger stays inside of this corpse-like shell.

For a moment i feel accepted, even among friends,
But how i'll feel next no longer depends;

On how the course of my day goes,
Because i know i'll just go from Highs to lows.

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  • Broken Bambi
    June 10

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    I can relate to this. although at the moment its mostly all lows but I'm a teenage girl, mood swings hehe sorry.
    I hope you feel better soon
    I like the rhyme too
    luvles you
    xx


  • brooklynngirl gold member
    June 9

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    Hmmm... i can totally relate here. i hope you feel better!
    i liked this poem! the form is nice, and the word choice is superb!
    -b

  • x dollface x
    June 5

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    I have this happen ALL the frickin' time! I love how you tranferred this to paper, literally! Lol. All around great read.