Spirits soar around us
as the light leaves {touches}.
Swirling, gathering in mass quantities
and coming together for a final time.
Let us be one....
Author notes
Prompt - What is she thinking?
Picture Credit- Unknown
A contest entry
- 216th Contest by Tarja.
450 points, ended June 13, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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A little short but in no way missing anything. I find the fact that you were able to accomplish that to be a real... ... achievement. So much expressed with so little written. This is brilliant. Went flawlessly with the picture as well so even more perfect! I enjoyed this quite a bit thank you. Good luck.
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Ohhhhhh......very lovely!!! You kind of amde a dark pic somewhat light!!! Excellent job and best wishes...
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