Intro Chorus:
Well, pardon me for being a nice guy
Walkin' around with my heart on my sleeve
You can just kiss my butt bye-bye
No more lies, turn around and leave
Somehow I got lost in your deep brown eyes
Wrapped around your 5'2 frame
Endless days and sleepless nights
Lyin' awake, calling your name
So much time wasted working on a dream
Based on a love that wasn't true
You toyed with my heart, that was so mean
I kept wonderin' what I ever did to you
Chorus:
Well, pardon me for being a nice guy
Walkin' around with my heart on my sleeve
You can just kiss my butt bye-bye
No more lies, turn around and leave
When I came to you when things didn't add up
You had an answer for everything
How you looked me in the eye and told me those lies
And lived with yourself is beyond me
Y'know, it's funny, I thought we were together
That you'd honor me like I honored you
I remained honest and was true to us
While you messed around with God knows who
/break/
Chorus:
Well, pardon me for being a nice guy
Walkin' around with my heart on my sleeve
You can just kiss my butt bye-bye
No more lies, turn around and leave
Trans-Bridge:
If I wanted the hand of a liar and a thief
I'da sided with the devil himself
But you came to me, all nice and sweet
You played me, now you can go to...
Chorus:
Well, pardon me for being a nice guy
Walkin' around with my heart on my sleeve
You can just kiss my butt bye-bye
No more lies, turn around and leave
/Repeat Chorus/
Bye-bye
Author notes
Option #4: Lyrics
Music Style: Hard Rock (w/ attitude) ~ think Alice Cooper meets Soundgarden
I wrote this as closure to a relationship where the girl really played me...Originally written for my former band Sykokitty.
The above CD cover is original artwork, © 2003 Sykokitty Grafix
Side note: this in no way, shape or form refers to my current relationship!
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A contest entry
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Comments
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o do you have the song uploaded? im at school so if it is ill have to listen to it at the library. i like the lyrics though, nice job nd thanks for entering
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i would not have thought of this as a hard rock song as i was reading this, but when i re-read it works that way too, i was thinking more accoustic to bring out the pain, but no matter how it's suppsoed to be sung i really like the lyrics here they are so strong, great work, best of luck in the contest
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ok love this poem!
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very nice write, thanks for entering
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Tim, buddy,
I Loved this song, you have such a great talent for writting songs, another awesome write. love, D. x
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Ooooh, what an incredible song! While reading, I even had a beat going on in my mind, a rhythm, almost, but I'm sure I was completely off
Amazing write. Loved every bit of it.
"Well, pardon me for being a nice guy
Walkin' around with my heart on my sleeve
You can just kiss my butt bye-bye
No more lies, turn around and leave"
Definitely my favorite. Loved the chorus, it was very uplifting. Thanks for the wonderful entry & best of luck to you ! ♥
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This is very good
I tried to write one to but never have tried a rock song before
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Sounds like the kind of relationships that I always seem to find myself in. Thinking he's going to be a pleasant guy, better than the one before and then he ends up breaking my heart more than anyone else. Such a tragedy but, it does become part of life after a while. Glad you have a better relationship now though.
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sweetness
sweet song! i can hear the gee-tars and the drums already! i think this one has potential
good luck,
damien
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Wow, a extremely talented songwriter..flowed right along so nicely
You should add an audio link and sing it, putfile.com allows you to upload your audio and you can then add a link to your poem page,
Bravo on this, most enjoyable,
galfalfa
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Her loss
Well, I can see the bitterness in this one. Her loss anyway; you got someone better, now. Good work, Tim.
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Wow! You're amazing! I loved it!
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