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The family thats lost

Everyone needs a loving family
A mother and father to share
I just feel bad for other kids
Whose mothers and fathers are not there

Family equils love
Some leave right out the door
I don't know how people  go with life
I Know it hurts there heart to it's very core

A heart broken
And surly more to tear
They want to be there for there children
Because there childhood they couldn't bare

They want to be loved
To have someone to care
To find someone to love
For better memories to share

They want the hurt
To just go away
Thay want the true love
To always hold and let stay

A family is important
Someone to love indeed
Someone to guide you threw life
It's something most people need

Someone to look up to
Someone to hold you tight
Parents that watch you succeed in life
And are there to kiss you good night

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  • Sound of Madness
    June 9, 2008

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    Yeah, every child needs a family, and parents who love them. I know several people who have the parents, but don't have the love part. Nice work.


  • maktub
    June 6, 2008
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    perfect...what you said is so true.


  • jagchoir
    June 5, 2008
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    I seriously love this poem. ^^;