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Physic





I love your voice slowly sliding,
in my eardrums as a beastly flood;
to explode flashing pigeons of nudity,
sweats sticky, can't find a simple way.

Falling into the path of my physic;
in grey lavender tender hairy furs,
collapsed within an ultimate disposition,
driving my soul in hatred of dampness.

Humidity left in unnourished vastness,
when deeply grow as benign manger lily;
in suffering transitive placid at edges
of hits sudden, amid middle of nocturnal.











Author notes

~spiritualangel~

Prompt: Picture
Credit: misslenin
Link: http://photobucket.com/image/funny%20pictures/misslenin/ihatehumidity.jpg?o=2

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  • penman gold member
    June 6, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.