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She Is Always There (Triolet)

She is always there, my soft skinned one
Caring, lighting up my life
Waiting for me when my days work is done
She is always there, my soft skinned one
With hugs and kisses, words of fun
She brings me joy, allays all my strife
She is always there, my soft skinned one
Caring, lighting up my life

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  • nom de guerre
    June 7, 2008

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    That's about as good as it gets I think...someone waiting for you when the day is done. Someone to share the highs and lows...someone to make my dinner...

    No, but it's beautiful, says what any guy worth his salt would cherish.


  • Mari Goes gold member
    June 5, 2008

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    This is very lovely Bill. A warm and nice poem to someone who stands always by the side of her man.
    Always good when we read words of appreciation to women.
    Lovely Triolet!

    Mari