glitter glitter
shimmer shimmer
when it's all gone to shit
all you wanna do is quit
you say that you love me
you say that you care
but what it get's to it
I'm pulling my hair
let's trace the tracks of journey's end
you think you know someone
then they scream
then it end's
on the outside
you sing with sweet remorse
but on the inside
you burn with hateful words
glitter glitter
shimmer shimmer
when it's all gone to shit
all you wanna do is quit
you struck me with thunder
the loud and the silent
you think you know it all
you think you're heaven sent
but look around baby
you're nothing
you're no one
don't call me your baby
don't call me again
glitter glitter
shimmer shimmer
when it's all gone to shit
all you wanna do is quit
but renewed once again
by silence in sleep
you're surrounded by sin
let's go far and deep
glitter glitter
shimmer shimmer
when it's all gone to shit
all you wanna do is quit
A contest entry
- Prewrite Craze Contest by BlackSwan.
550 points, ended June 29, 2008, 84 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Really good song, I liked how you inserted the
"glitter glitter shimmer shimmer" stanzas in a pattern
Very well done
-GL in contest

