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here goes your song

glitter glitter
shimmer shimmer
when it's all gone to shit
all you wanna do is quit

you say that you love me
you say that you care
but what it get's to it
I'm pulling my hair

let's trace the tracks of journey's end
you think you know someone
then they scream
then it end's
on the outside
you sing with sweet remorse
but on the inside
you burn with hateful words

glitter glitter
shimmer shimmer
when it's all gone to shit
all you wanna do is quit

you struck me with thunder
the loud and the silent
you think you know it all
you think you're heaven sent
but look around baby
you're nothing
you're no one
don't call me your baby
don't call me again

glitter glitter
shimmer shimmer
when it's all gone to shit
all you wanna do is quit

but renewed once again
by silence in sleep
you're surrounded by sin
let's go far and deep

glitter glitter
shimmer shimmer
when it's all gone to shit
all you wanna do is quit


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  • BlackSwan
    June 9, 2008

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    Really good song, I liked how you inserted the

    "glitter glitter shimmer shimmer" stanzas in a pattern
    Very well done

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