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I Would Die Without You

Her touch,
ruined me.
Her kiss,
killed me.
Her presence,
haunts me.
I will die,
without her.

She's the reason,
I'm gay.
She's the reason,
I'm lost.
She's the reason,
I'm dead!
I cry every night,
wishing.
I want her,
to come back to me.
She hates me,
but yet I love.

Her touch,
ruined me,
Her kiss,
killed me.
Her presence,
haunts me.
Without her,
I will die!

Author notes

i hate her, and i hope she knows what she did to me. i just watched lost and delirious again and every time, i cry at the end. she ruined my life by helping me come to realization with myself. sometimes i hate being gay, sometimes i love it.

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  • Sam-Heartagram
    August 24, 2008
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    wow that brings home a major point
    no matter if you are gay or straight, there is always someone there to hurt you, but its all part of life. you fall down, you get up, you try to hold your head up, and you learn because at the end of the day you are stronger and better because of it.


  • Simply Simple
    June 10, 2008

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    Amazing...
    It proves a major point.
    I see below that someone said "Time heals all wounds." While time will help, wounds will only heal if you let them. Don't be afraid to move on. Don't feel like you have to cling to who you once were.
    Part of being human is changing and losing what we have to make room for what we've gained and want.
    This just proves what so many need to learn.
    People are people. Not one person is the same as any other, which is wonderful. However, we all feel. How we feel is different, but we all feel nonetheless.
    Thanks for sharing.
    I hope all goes well for you soon.
    It's a shame AP only let's us give three clappys.

  • little lost soul
    June 7, 2008
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    Wow

    this is really deep


  • emo-freak
    June 5, 2008
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    so personal

    i love it, but its so sad, i do love a gay love story though, just shows that that GLBT are just as "normal" and feeling as anyone else. Time heals all wounds, but u'll always have a scar to prove it happened. dont let it kill you, soon u'll find a better person for yourself.

  • XXVampire-GirlXX
    June 5, 2008

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    sweet

    This is really good! I dont really understand the feeling well i kind of do but every heart break that i have had was my fault i hurt them so yeah! ur really good though DONT STOP WRITING!!!

    ~*~Jamie~*~


  • Strify
    June 5, 2008

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    I know how you feel...I'm bisexual...It was really good! It's good to get out your emotions and feelings.

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