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Love to Die For

No longer mourn for me, when I am dead.
Find another brave man to warm your bed.
Your lustful thirst for love, has gone unquenched.
You had me sweating in bed, till I was drenched.

You’re a vampire for love, sucking all men dry
for this lust to be sated how many men must die?
I thought I had it in me, I thought that I could last
but we met beyond my prime, I was living in the past.

No longer mourn for me, when I am dead
for I’ll be haunting your next victim, away from your bed!

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  • Yep, can definately see where you are coming from here.LOL. Still smiling..Thanks for your entry..


  • daviscth silver member
    March 13

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    LOL Thank you for the morning time laugh. I had fun reading this. Thank you for taking time to enter my contest.


  • RatherImaginative silver member
    November 13, 2008

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    That's how Hugh Hefner will go, I'm sure. The beauty of this piece is that someone could actually take it seriously if he/she wasn't careful. An apt warning for all nympho-golddiggers! Thanks so much for entering my contest!


  • poeticcaresses
    October 20, 2008

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    Very funny! "No longer mourn for me, when I am dead for I'll be haunting your next victim, away from your bed!" hillarious! Thanks for the read and for entering!


  • Meroza
    September 20, 2008
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    Evil one! Me like!


    Seriously, you're spamming me! I like that


  • TheDemonEve
    June 13, 2008
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    This reminds me of Annie Palmer.
    You should look her up.
    Well done!!!


  • Keith
    June 7, 2008

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    Well, you've gone and put a vampire into Willie Shakespeare's sonnet. Well done, indeed. I applaud a touch of humour. The rhyme between unquenched and drenched is an absolute cracker. Thanks for entering.


  • Justin
    June 5, 2008

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    Wow... this had a very silly flow to it, yet at the same time, I'm kinda scared now... haha... splendid write!

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