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The First Kiss

That first kiss from her
The feelings I have for her
They all rushed out
They came out as I returned her kiss
In just that moment
Both our lives felt complete
For we are in each others arms
Nothing could hurt either of us
Sadly though we went different ways
I still think of that first kiss
The way it made me feel
And I am sure she still thinks about it too
For in my heart and she knows it well
I would give my world to her
Just to see the smallest smile take her face
Every song she said was ours
I have kept each one
Emails, Photos everything
I still have everything she sent
For to erase any of them
Would be erasing my heart with them
I just want one last chance with her
To prove I am the man of her dreams
To prove that I would give everything up
In less then a heartbeat to see her smile
To hear that little schoolgirl giggle
She always made
It always seemed to brighten the day
I'm sure she knows this one thing true
Girl I will always love you

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  • Janetheplain
    August 20, 2008

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    How sweet. Second chances are always a rare occurance, I hope you get yours though. Very vulnerable poem, Jane


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    June 26, 2008
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    Good poem but why sid he leave her if he thought so much about their first kiss? S--t happens I guess and smoetimes our hearts lead as astray only to have later regrets. This happens to us all..DI\id i make a wrong choice???


    • killshort
      June 26, 2008
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      well you actually almsot got the entire poem but this is me writing about how it felt so good to be with her...and yet she turned and walked away


  • NickelleteXninja
    June 5, 2008
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    Hun, this is amazing

    You express your pain and love so well

  • deathstar
    June 5, 2008

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    love it man its good it macks me think of my first kiss thats the shite i like to read man keep good keep going with them.. ill read more cool

    • killshort
      June 5, 2008
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      thanks...this was something i needed to write i needed to say it in a way that just sounded perfect...and this was the way i figured it would...the words just came outta my heart for this piece

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