Designed within flames
Never question what is
Entangles two souls
He is hers;she is his
They take;they give
Two torsos; one heart
Destined together
Athwart being apart
Bottled sensations
Grant your desire
But if you jape love
You dance upon fire
Author notes
Hey it goes with my new name?? What do you think??????
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i actually like it alot it really has a very good flow i think u should right more like this ur very good at it and great choice with the title
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Great imagery in this piece painting a beautifully articulated picture of two souls aspiring to be one; but seems like there's a price to pay. Great write!Keep on writing and thank-you for sharing your creative self with us
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WOW
amazing
all the three stanzas give perfect sense to the imagery, you are a good writer. keep it up!
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wow!
this was somewhat spiritual... but very beauitfully written! the imagery here was vivid and stunning! keep penning kays... this was a great piece!
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