The heat of hurt
is oppressive
and rivulets of sweat
sweep sorrows
down her spine
and fine declarations
reach around
to claw cotton causes
away from her skin,
as she breathes ice
into her soul.
Thoughts carry conscience
that bulges
in careless curves,
as chequered chills
choke the truth
that sucks out
the flesh of her feelings-
spitting solace
in empty embrace
and hidden angers
shudder in silence
as shame judders to life
and reverses out
of perversed tides...
crushing tears
in years of neglect.
Hope pulls out
into Monday morning mayhem,
edging echoes
into quiet existence
and packed pauses
become causes for concern.
Sight picks up speed,
doing seventy
along determined veins
as purpose plays
on pock-marked prohibitions;
tilting sideways
on waves of waking wonders
and complimentary actions
hold head
and balance
as she treads the tightrope
of life's lamentations.
Her experience is expansive,
its meaning monotonous...
beliefs once broken
only by odd occurence
and lines of love
flapping fragile
from agile fingers.
Author notes
Picture Inspired
A contest entry
- 216th Contest by Tarja.
450 points, ended June 13, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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The word choice in this was amazing. I really enjoyed how uniquely placed your words were expressed. It went so wonderfully with the picture too. Fabulous. This was a very nice piece. And I thank you for entering. Good luck.
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Nicely Written.


