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Final Destination

Searching cosmos

Earth surrendered

 

Lunacy in glory

 

Scarecrows resort

Diet radiation

 

Sewers of greed

 

.....Inevitable

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Theres the smell of stale fear and it reeks from our skin; The Bravery

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  • aboomer silver member
    July 10

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    Short, but a lot of depth in this. I especially like the line,
    'Lunacy in glory'
    - and great title for this.
    Most enjoyable - and makes me think (which is almost an 'obsession' for a Gemini...lol)..
    best wishes


  • marlene47 silver member
    June 6

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    Like your words... earth surrendered, lunacy's glory, scarecrows resort (ouch), diet radiation and greedy sewers.
    Marlene

    • tainfinite
      June 6
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      tainfinite

      appreciate your comment, thought there for awhile it was to obscure,glad you enjoyed it,gives me a bit of confidence to write the edge

  • PresidentDangerK2
    June 5
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    Nicely done. Thanks for entering.