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Soft breezes of the future

have become winters chill of  loneliness.

I close my eyes and your face is a mere vapour of memory.

I reach back to yesterday and the emptiness is palpable.

As the light tries to reach through my fog

barbs of anger threaten my consciousness,

but is dispersed by wilting petals of  grief.

 

Finally I will rid myself of rememberances

that never really existed.

 

 

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"A Farewell" by: Saca (Deviant)

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  • SilverStrandedEcho
    June 10, 2008

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    Truly a vivid and well expressed poem you have penned here. A very nice interpretation of the image prompt. Thank you for your entry!


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    June 5, 2008

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    all rememberances exist..if only in the hopefulness of our minds,,oh i do waffle on good luck xxx peter