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Choice

standing at the crossroads
confused, which way to turn?

with him, and the life
everyone wants me to live?

or the one who's shown me
the desires of my heart
offered me everything...

i've been living for too long
on the edge, and now i've come
to where i have no choice
but to make a choice.

i want what i want
and nothing more,

but i can't tell yet
exactly what that will be.

i've been holding off
just to wait and see
trying to make it work..
but now i have no choice
but to make a choice.

he wants to be with me
he tells me everthing
everyone else chooses him..

but he loves me truly,
knows me better
and no one wants to see me
with him.

can't leave it up
to anyone else,
can't put it off any longer
so now i have no choice
but to make a choice.

x♥x

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true story =/

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  • Lislaine
    June 5, 2008

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    waw! beautiful!!! nicely done!! just loved it.. hope you had fun and thx 4 entering my contest and GOOD luck


  • Strify
    June 5, 2008
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    Amazing! Very beautiful.


  • Domz101
    June 5, 2008

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    very impressive...!*CLAPPY*

    'i want what i want
    and nothing more,'
    this was my fav part and its all written in such realism and sincerity, readers, espescially me, appriciate sincerity...great write and great use of emotions...domz